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Title: my song
Post by: sm0k on June 13, 2011, 02:26 PM
elo
i made my own, 1st song. geman one.
would like to know what the german ppl here think about it. dont forget its my 1st one ^^

Title: Re: my song
Post by: Camper on June 13, 2011, 02:28 PM
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Post by: jot on June 13, 2011, 02:34 PM
I live in Poland, and i don't understand this song, but the style i like very much. ; )
I also raps : D important, so you liked what you do ;]
Good luck ! :)

http://reflexip.wrzuta.pl/   -  a few main song's, and here www.myspace.com/czysteslowa  but just other name ; D
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Post by: Cueshark on June 13, 2011, 04:10 PM
Did you write and produce the backing music as well?  ;O
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Post by: sm0k on June 13, 2011, 04:32 PM
i wrote this text.
its a free beat .. found it on a page. im not a pro ;p i just found a new hobby
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Post by: avirex on June 13, 2011, 04:42 PM
lol german rap!! thats awesome!!

i know anubis will be a fan !hahah
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Post by: Csongi on June 13, 2011, 04:46 PM
I don't understand a shit,but it doesen't sounds bad at all  :P

keep up the good work  8)
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Post by: philie on June 13, 2011, 05:33 PM
ahrm, am i the first one here who understands this?
sry dude, nothing personal, but i think it sucks :/
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Post by: darKz on June 13, 2011, 05:54 PM
What philie said. :D
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Post by: rU` on June 13, 2011, 06:32 PM
hey sm0k, can't give much opinion here myself. But as it's your first try, I wouldn't say that it's that bad! let's not be pessimist. I can say that I love the car on the background on that pic cause I own the same vehicle :D Ford Mondeo!

Quote from: philie on June 13, 2011, 05:33 PM
ahrm, am i the first one here who understands this?
sry dude, nothing personal, but i think it sucks :/
is that your opinion only because Rap ain't your style? just asking.
Title: Re: my song
Post by: sm0k on June 13, 2011, 06:43 PM
mondeo ftw ^^

personaly i think this song isnt that good too. so im not mad ;p
but i already heard difficult opinions. some likes and some dont.. (not just in this forum)

but well yea .. any idea what could be done better?
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Post by: Throsti on June 13, 2011, 09:06 PM
What a gangsta rap
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Post by: TheKomodo on June 13, 2011, 10:18 PM
sm0k, my serious advice, it's better to compose and produce the backing track yourself also, as soon as this beat starting playing I knew it was a "free beat" that you can download from the net, these tracks have no soul and no passion to them, and the only way to make it in the music business, or even be taken seriously is to have soul and passion in your music.

A Polish guy Rapping in German though... That's f@#!ing funny xDxD
Title: Re: my song
Post by: philie on June 14, 2011, 01:33 AM
Leroy: it's not my music, but i know some good german rap and this does not belong to it.
sm0k: you gotta practice your voice.
Title: Re: my song
Post by: philie on June 14, 2011, 01:37 AM
example:
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Post by: TheKomodo on June 14, 2011, 02:09 AM
Lol philie, it's like German Eminem...
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Post by: Alien on June 14, 2011, 09:37 AM
can anyone battle this toy ? haha joke sm0k :D
try more and harder if you like to do it and don't play to much worms.
maybe you will become a good rapper ! 8)

Title: Re: my song
Post by: sm0k on June 14, 2011, 05:42 PM
ye philli u e right, i have rly to practise my voice..  when i record this sopng i didnt had much time .. my friend were bussy , so i didnt had many tries
komo .. i know own beatz are better.. but i just make it for hobby and not for profesional buissnes. but i will buy soon some stuff and try to make own beatz. u e right .. own beatz + own lycris its soul of personaly music.
alien, i will :D but i keep playing worms active ;p

thanx mates for clearly answers :) i know what i have to do now .. when my next song come up i will show u, then u can rate it ;p
but it will take  a time.. i will recod the next one when i got my own multimedia stuff.  not a profsesional one .. wanna buy whole stuff i need for 500-1000 euro.

Title: Re: my song
Post by: NinjaCamel on June 14, 2011, 06:21 PM
Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD
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Post by: Devilage on June 14, 2011, 07:44 PM
Aw mate ur voice ;s put some effort on a good flow :p
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Post by: Anubis on June 14, 2011, 07:52 PM
I actually liked the song, but I don't know what is good or bad in rap. :D

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Post by: avirex on June 14, 2011, 10:15 PM
i told you you would have a fan in anubis :D

and really, thats all that matters.
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Post by: sm0k on June 15, 2011, 03:37 PM
thanx DeathInFire

avi mai u re right ^^
Title: Re: my song
Post by: TheKomodo on June 16, 2011, 06:51 AM
Quote from: NinjaCamel on June 14, 2011, 06:21 PM
Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD

Are you talking about Rap specific? Hmm it depends cuz for me it's better to build the music around the lyrics/vocals, if you know what I mean?
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Post by: theredi on June 16, 2011, 07:15 AM
lmao that german rap hurt my ears ;p
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Post by: NinjaCamel on June 16, 2011, 08:42 AM
Quote from: Komito on June 16, 2011, 06:51 AM
Quote from: NinjaCamel on June 14, 2011, 06:21 PM
Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD

Are you talking about Rap specific? Hmm it depends cuz for me it's better to build the music around the lyrics/vocals, if you know what I mean?

Yea im talking about rap. I barely never listen something else jaja. Lyrics and/or flow, r the most important thing in rap now and always has been. Not everyone can make nice beats who wanna start to rap and rapping is the thing there. Electronic music is for those who dont want to rap.

I dont listen too much english rap but theres example of song which sample u will find from dämn million another song:


sampled from:



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Post by: Dub-c on June 16, 2011, 09:18 AM
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Post by: theredi on June 16, 2011, 10:42 AM
xD
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Post by: Rok on June 16, 2011, 12:47 PM
lolrapsux



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Work on your voice, sm0k.  ;)
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Post by: Abnaxus on June 16, 2011, 02:32 PM
About Sm0k, I would say it misses a bit of motivation (voice goes top to down).  :)
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Post by: THeDoGG on June 16, 2011, 03:02 PM
rOfl at this song...

But anyway it's kind of hard to get a good flow with a language such as.. german XDDDD

Here is a good one tho :
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Post by: Breeze on June 20, 2011, 05:06 AM
Quote from: ThaShady1 on June 16, 2011, 09:18 AM


Odd Future pwn.
Title: Re: my song
Post by: Alien on June 22, 2011, 02:07 PM
yo, i have made this little intro beat with fruity loops...took me 2 days, cause i am a beginner in music making too ! :D
isn't done yet, cause i will make a song of it, if i have time...
what do you think, sounds nice or boring ? 8)

http://www13.zippyshare.com/v/30261816/file.html
Title: Re: my song
Post by: Alien on July 31, 2011, 02:18 AM
and here my little hard project song...it's also not finished and i know quality is shit, because i'm a noob in mixing and mastering ! xD
but maybe someone likes it... xD

http://www9.zippyshare.com/v/89114050/file.html
Title: Re: my song
Post by: Alien on July 31, 2011, 02:34 AM
or maybe this one, yes yes bad quality ! ;p

http://www63.zippyshare.com/v/25874597/file.html
Title: Re: my song
Post by: angus on July 31, 2011, 05:14 AM
Quote from: Alien on July 31, 2011, 02:18 AM
and here my little hard project song...it's also not finished and i know quality is shit, because i'm a noob in mixing and mastering ! xD
but maybe someone likes it... xD

http://www9.zippyshare.com/v/89114050/file.html

lol that kind of music sux but..... is that ur voice or?
Title: Re: my song
Post by: Alien on July 31, 2011, 11:15 AM
replace sux with rox and i agree with you...no just a sample.
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Post by: NinjaCamel on July 31, 2011, 12:18 PM
loloo gotta listen when im home jaja. Lo-fi sound ftw man!
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Post by: darKz on July 31, 2011, 01:14 PM
angus said it all.

Quote from: angus on July 31, 2011, 05:14 AM
lol that kind of music sux
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Post by: Peja on July 31, 2011, 01:18 PM
well done i really enjoyed it
Title: Re: my song
Post by: Alien on July 31, 2011, 01:29 PM
Quote from: Peja on July 31, 2011, 01:18 PM
well done i really enjoyed it

peja said it all. xd

btw darkz are you dj bobo, cause his name is rene too and he comes from suisse ! ;O
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Post by: nino on July 31, 2011, 04:20 PM
darkz aka putinho is from german lol.  :P
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Post by: Alien on July 31, 2011, 04:24 PM
porra !
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Post by: philie on July 31, 2011, 08:25 PM
my opinion: the first sucks, the 2nd is ok.
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Post by: xDrAg0x on August 02, 2011, 07:09 AM
No idea what your saying but I like it :)