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Title: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 09, 2013, 04:11 AM
yo. just were about to start to write my 2nd part on a track and some english lines popped up in my head, what i thought could be the hook, cos i got a nice flow to these lines. anyway, i need 1 more line in english, lets see if something useful pops up XD

here the lines:

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but fly/
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 09, 2013, 04:25 AM
what u think about "welcome to my life"? every line 5 syllables
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 09, 2013, 04:36 AM
ye, ima take that one
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: TheKomodo on September 09, 2013, 07:00 AM
Welcome to my life doesn't rhyme with the rest though...
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: ANO on September 09, 2013, 07:33 AM
"I wanna f@#! your wife".
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: MonkeyIsland on September 09, 2013, 09:02 AM
"Don't you judge and sigh"
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: TheKomodo on September 09, 2013, 09:17 AM
Welcome to my life
kingdom took by knife
things can be so strife
livin that thug life


To be honest, there isn't alot to actually rhyme with "life" lol...

Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Fcrate on September 09, 2013, 09:46 AM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but fly/
A pill of ecstasy and I go byebye!
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: GreatProfe on September 09, 2013, 11:12 AM
sounds like a Simple Plan song xD
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Rogi on September 09, 2013, 12:04 PM
i play worms every daaaay,
i know im not gaaay,
the proofe is sasha graaay,
those words have rusty waaay

My head full of ganjaaa
it's hard to control bungeeee
i wanna take a breaak
And start to sing in greek

meheheheh
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Impossible on September 09, 2013, 01:10 PM
Im chelsea, and my dick erected
When I avoided high five.
But what did you expected? lol
Welcome to my life!
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Chelsea on September 09, 2013, 01:21 PM
i'm impo and i'm whore
my life is hardcore
my dick is hard to find
It's kind of game
becouse my life is shame

Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Impossible on September 09, 2013, 01:46 PM
i'm impo
i'm whore
have you already decided if you are impo or rather a whore? :D
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: ANO on September 09, 2013, 02:42 PM
FOUND IT:

"This topic is for gay guys"

YO!
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Chelsea on September 09, 2013, 02:55 PM
i'm impo
i'm whore
have you already decided if you are impo or rather a whore? :D

impo and whore it's same xD
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: theredi on September 09, 2013, 02:57 PM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but fly/
that aint a f@#!ing lie
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Statik on September 09, 2013, 02:59 PM
Hey Ho I'm here, Statik online. So am I pro? No-Nicht-Nein! I play for fun, abuse for fun, I like my weri gosu clan, So what to say? I dunno. Hey! So many friends, So lil' online. It's not the end of storyline. So i like play, do u? okay, Just ask me to, We'll kinda play. But if u scare of gettin loose, u'll never be a pro, excuse. I like to eat, I like to live, I like the getting someone's gift. The end? Not now, i dont like end's, but what to say? Good Luck my friendz.
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: avirex on September 09, 2013, 04:05 PM
lol..  nice



i get drunk and high/
til' the day i die/
got no wings, butta fly/
with grace, like a 'buttafly'/

Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: Triad on September 09, 2013, 07:14 PM
Ahahah those reminds me old sig of MrPimpo in donanimhaber.com

Quote
Shut up man, its my pace
I dont wanna see your f@#!in face
You know me? The Mr. Pimpo
f@#!s your mama, while doing limbo
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 09, 2013, 11:40 PM
haha, u guys going crazy!!

some good stuff actually, so good, that i think that i drop my mate out of the hook and do it myself completely in english, yeah!!

not sure, yet, but i think i like avirexes 4th line the most, since i'm pretty technically about my lyrics. he means "butterfly" instead of "but I fly", which is exactly what I do in german all the time, that just fits me perfectly, just gotta google up what the last line actually means. but n@#!!!z, lets continue the hook to 8 lines!! im lookin forward

edit:

these are the lines i think i can pull something off with:

"Don't you judge and sigh"
things can be so strife
livin that thug life
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 12:16 AM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 12:24 AM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/
Yeah, things can be so strife/
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 12:30 AM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/
Yeah, things can be so strife/
while living that thug life/
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: avirex on September 10, 2013, 11:27 AM
with grace like a butterfly....

grace is moving with ease, and butterfly is the "graceful" type bug, i believe they are all over the world... they transform from a caterpillar, then into a 'cacoon' and then into a beautiful bug, with wings, and colors...


sounds like a 'soft' line, but not really, being it was a famous quote from one of americas most talented boxers of all time Muhamid Ali - "float like a butterfly, sting like a bee"


i dont like your second verse...   unless thats your specific style, the whole thug life thing...   i think that crap is over rated, it was cool in the 90's... but now i think word play, metaphores, and story line is much more important, then talking about thug life.  just my opinion..

Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: GreatProfe on September 10, 2013, 01:46 PM
i would switch "welcome to my life" to "say hi 4 my life"
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 05:50 PM
avi, i just googled up "grace" and got the meaning of ur sentence already. is it the "thug life" thing what u dont like or the whole 2nd part of the hook? thug life means to me my actual situation, tho. not being a gangster or anything, cos i'm not, nor am i crimminal, at the moment i just hustle trough the day with no plan where to get anything from. like food/drugs an  shit, cant pay any bill and stuff. prolly start working next week, tho. but i was my whole life pretty poor and shit, thats what i mean with that thug life thing. yet i don't like it that much, tho, cos it refers to 2Pac and people in gernal mean u mean some gangster life fighting whole on the streets and shit, heh
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: ANO on September 10, 2013, 07:29 PM
Sing in your mother tongue language, that could be more interesting and really COOL!!! instead of all this shit that sounds bad and "teenager".

Anal cheers 

Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 08:19 PM
i do everything in my mother language, this is the first time randomly english lines popped up in my head that made me think to do something with it, and i defenitely will ^_^. need to figure out the 2nd part of the hook, tho, can get more out of it
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 08:24 PM
something with "ease my mind" popped up in ze brains
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 08:28 PM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/

what u think about that to start the 2nd part of my hook?
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 08:29 PM
kkkkk
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 10, 2013, 11:55 PM
I got to ease my mind/
'cos everything's so strife/

"I got to" or "I gotta"? and 2 more lines, n@#!!!s, gogo!! maybe the "welcome to my life" gonna be the last line?
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 11, 2013, 11:24 AM
I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/
'cos life can be so strife/
but i never give up and try/
to stay baked. Drink and Smoke bongpipe all night/
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: avirex on September 11, 2013, 04:43 PM
i gota ease my mind/

kick back and unwind/

the sensation of medication is ralxin i find/

so im the physician when written prescriptions of some maximus rhymes/

too much? haha
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 11, 2013, 05:45 PM
its ok as it is now, i guess :P. just figured the flow out today with my mate, sounds pretty classic tbh. my best hook so far and ive done some good shit already. but this one in english impressed both of us xd
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: avirex on September 11, 2013, 06:47 PM
lol.. id like to hear..

if be interested to see how you pronounce some words. ;p
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 11, 2013, 08:02 PM
i think i pronounce them right, aint something special in it. also i know how americans would do it ^^. but thats classic hook for sure, shit. i actually own i believe xD. gonna hear soon i think, depends if it comes on our mixtape, wich is sure i think. so we dont puttin it out yet
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: avirex on September 11, 2013, 10:07 PM
so what did u settle one?? this??

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/
'cos life can be so strife/
but i never give up and try/
to stay baked. Drink and Smoke bongpipe all night/


you do know nothing rhymes in the last verse rght??

mind/strife/try/night.... nothing rhymes man...  i guess strige, and night can work... but mind and try dont... but, whatever.. if your happy, im hapyy. gl. hope to hear it soon.
Title: Re: english rhyme pros
Post by: twistah on September 11, 2013, 10:33 PM
its a different flow, but it rhymes perfectly.