1st off, absolutely LOVE the sorta 70's groovy rolling hi hats.
Although it's still not something i'd connect with or anything, I prefer it to the other stuff you did, would be nice to drive with in GTA5
Your voice is so heavenly could replace the song in the trippy bit as you are falling through the sky, would fit!
I do like your singing style, would love to work with you on some Liquid DnB in future someday, you've got such a nice voice for that calm relaxing and uplifting style.
Nice drum fills too, guitars are quite nice and atmospheric, good mixdown
Don't really have any other complaints other than it's not my style lol.
Keep it up