twistah, the best advice I can give you, the best advice i've ever heard, is when you naturally enjoy doing what you do, other people will take onto that faster.
And I hate rich kids who get other people to do their work, I was impressed with your video not because I think you are the best rapper in the world, cuz you ain't lol, not because it's the best backing instrumental in the world (I honestly think I could do better myself if I tried).But because I noticed all the small natural passionate things, especially you, and the fact you are doing it all yourself, and the only help you will accept is probably that of your closest friends.
Now, I don't know what the f@#! you are rapping about lol, but I can tell as a fellow music lover, you have a VERY good sense of rythem, ALOT of passion, and you are VERY confident, these are the 3 most important things in music as far as I am concerned.