english rhyme pros

[twistah]

kkkkk

[twistah]

I got to ease my mind/
'cos everything's so strife/

"I got to" or "I gotta"? and 2 more lines, n@#!!!s, gogo!! maybe the "welcome to my life" gonna be the last line?

[twistah]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/
'cos life can be so strife/
but i never give up and try/
to stay baked. Drink and Smoke bongpipe all night/

[avirex]

i gota ease my mind/

kick back and unwind/

the sensation of medication is ralxin i find/

so im the physician when written prescriptions of some maximus rhymes/

too much? haha

[twistah]

its ok as it is now, i guess . just figured the flow out today with my mate, sounds pretty classic tbh. my best hook so far and ive done some good shit already. but this one in english impressed both of us xd

[avirex]

lol.. id like to hear..

if be interested to see how you pronounce some words. ;p

[twistah]

i think i pronounce them right, aint something special in it. also i know how americans would do it ^^. but thats classic hook for sure, shit. i actually own i believe xD. gonna hear soon i think, depends if it comes on our mixtape, wich is sure i think. so we dont puttin it out yet

[avirex]

so what did u settle one?? this??

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/
'cos life can be so strife/
but i never give up and try/
to stay baked. Drink and Smoke bongpipe all night/


you do know nothing rhymes in the last verse rght??

mind/strife/try/night.... nothing rhymes man...  i guess strige, and night can work... but mind and try dont... but, whatever.. if your happy, im hapyy. gl. hope to hear it soon.

[twistah]

its a different flow, but it rhymes perfectly.