english rhyme pros

[theredi]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but fly/
that aint a f@#!ing lie

[Statik]

Hey Ho I'm here, Statik online. So am I pro? No-Nicht-Nein! I play for fun, abuse for fun, I like my weri gosu clan, So what to say? I dunno. Hey! So many friends, So lil' online. It's not the end of storyline. So i like play, do u? okay, Just ask me to, We'll kinda play. But if u scare of gettin loose, u'll never be a pro, excuse. I like to eat, I like to live, I like the getting someone's gift. The end? Not now, i dont like end's, but what to say? Good Luck my friendz.

[avirex]

lol..  nice



i get drunk and high/
til' the day i die/
got no wings, butta fly/
with grace, like a 'buttafly'/

[Triad]

Ahahah those reminds me old sig of MrPimpo in donanimhaber.com

Shut up man, its my pace
I dont wanna see your f@#!in face
You know me? The Mr. Pimpo
f@#!s your mama, while doing limbo

[twistah]

haha, u guys going crazy!!

some good stuff actually, so good, that i think that i drop my mate out of the hook and do it myself completely in english, yeah!!

not sure, yet, but i think i like avirexes 4th line the most, since i'm pretty technically about my lyrics. he means "butterfly" instead of "but I fly", which is exactly what I do in german all the time, that just fits me perfectly, just gotta google up what the last line actually means. but n@#!!!z, lets continue the hook to 8 lines!! im lookin forward

edit:

these are the lines i think i can pull something off with:

"Don't you judge and sigh"
things can be so strife
livin that thug life

[twistah]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/

[twistah]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/
Yeah, things can be so strife/

[twistah]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

Welcome to my life/
Yeah, things can be so strife/
while living that thug life/

[avirex]

with grace like a butterfly....

grace is moving with ease, and butterfly is the "graceful" type bug, i believe they are all over the world... they transform from a caterpillar, then into a 'cacoon' and then into a beautiful bug, with wings, and colors...


sounds like a 'soft' line, but not really, being it was a famous quote from one of americas most talented boxers of all time Muhamid Ali - "float like a butterfly, sting like a bee"


i dont like your second verse...   unless thats your specific style, the whole thug life thing...   i think that crap is over rated, it was cool in the 90's... but now i think word play, metaphores, and story line is much more important, then talking about thug life.  just my opinion..

[GreatProfe]

i would switch "welcome to my life" to "say hi 4 my life"

[twistah]

avi, i just googled up "grace" and got the meaning of ur sentence already. is it the "thug life" thing what u dont like or the whole 2nd part of the hook? thug life means to me my actual situation, tho. not being a gangster or anything, cos i'm not, nor am i crimminal, at the moment i just hustle trough the day with no plan where to get anything from. like food/drugs an  shit, cant pay any bill and stuff. prolly start working next week, tho. but i was my whole life pretty poor and shit, thats what i mean with that thug life thing. yet i don't like it that much, tho, cos it refers to 2Pac and people in gernal mean u mean some gangster life fighting whole on the streets and shit, heh

[ANO]

Sing in your mother tongue language, that could be more interesting and really COOL!!! instead of all this shit that sounds bad and "teenager".

Anal cheers 

[twistah]

i do everything in my mother language, this is the first time randomly english lines popped up in my head that made me think to do something with it, and i defenitely will ^_^. need to figure out the 2nd part of the hook, tho, can get more out of it

[twistah]

something with "ease my mind" popped up in ze brains

[twistah]

I get drunk and high/
till the day I die/
Got no wings, but I fly/
with grace like a butterfly/

I gotta ease my mind/

what u think about that to start the 2nd part of my hook?