my song

[TheKomodo]

Lol philie, it's like German Eminem...

[Alien]

can anyone battle this toy ? haha joke sm0k
try more and harder if you like to do it and don't play to much worms.
maybe you will become a good rapper !

[sm0k]

ye philli u e right, i have rly to practise my voice..  when i record this sopng i didnt had much time .. my friend were bussy , so i didnt had many tries
komo .. i know own beatz are better.. but i just make it for hobby and not for profesional buissnes. but i will buy soon some stuff and try to make own beatz. u e right .. own beatz + own lycris its soul of personaly music.
alien, i will but i keep playing worms active ;p

thanx mates for clearly answers i know what i have to do now .. when my next song come up i will show u, then u can rate it ;p
but it will take  a time.. i will recod the next one when i got my own multimedia stuff.  not a profsesional one .. wanna buy whole stuff i need for 500-1000 euro.

[NinjaCamel]

Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD

[Devilage]

Aw mate ur voice ;s put some effort on a good flow :p

[Anubis]

I actually liked the song, but I don't know what is good or bad in rap.

[avirex]

i told you you would have a fan in anubis

and really, thats all that matters.

[sm0k]

thanx DeathInFire

avi mai u re right ^^

[TheKomodo]

Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD

Are you talking about Rap specific? Hmm it depends cuz for me it's better to build the music around the lyrics/vocals, if you know what I mean?

[theredi]

lmao that german rap hurt my ears ;p

[NinjaCamel]

Its much better to use somebodys beats and sample them than try to do some shitty beats.. and dämn big part of rappers use others beats and sample them from somewhere. Cant say alot about the song cus cant understand lyrics but sounds like the first one yeaxD

Are you talking about Rap specific? Hmm it depends cuz for me it's better to build the music around the lyrics/vocals, if you know what I mean?

Yea im talking about rap. I barely never listen something else jaja. Lyrics and/or flow, r the most important thing in rap now and always has been. Not everyone can make nice beats who wanna start to rap and rapping is the thing there. Electronic music is for those who dont want to rap.

I dont listen too much english rap but theres example of song which sample u will find from dämn million another song:

 
sampled from:

[Dub-c]

[theredi]

xD

[Rok]

lolrapsux

[/flamebait]

Work on your voice, sm0k. 

[Abnaxus]

About Sm0k, I would say it misses a bit of motivation (voice goes top to down).