my song

[sm0k]

elo
i made my own, 1st song. geman one.
would like to know what the german ppl here think about it. dont forget its my 1st one ^^

[Camper]

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[jot]

I live in Poland, and i don't understand this song, but the style i like very much. ; )
I also raps : D important, so you liked what you do ;]
Good luck !

http://reflexip.wrzuta.pl/   -  a few main song's, and here www.myspace.com/czysteslowa  but just other name ; D

[Cueshark]

Did you write and produce the backing music as well?  ;O

[sm0k]

i wrote this text.
its a free beat .. found it on a page. im not a pro ;p i just found a new hobby

[avirex]

lol german rap!! thats awesome!!

i know anubis will be a fan !hahah

[Csongi]

I don't understand a shit,but it doesen't sounds bad at all 

keep up the good work 

[philie]

ahrm, am i the first one here who understands this?
sry dude, nothing personal, but i think it sucks :/

[darKz]

What philie said.

[rU`]

hey sm0k, can't give much opinion here myself. But as it's your first try, I wouldn't say that it's that bad! let's not be pessimist. I can say that I love the car on the background on that pic cause I own the same vehicle Ford Mondeo!

ahrm, am i the first one here who understands this?
sry dude, nothing personal, but i think it sucks :/

is that your opinion only because Rap ain't your style? just asking.

[sm0k]

mondeo ftw ^^

personaly i think this song isnt that good too. so im not mad ;p
but i already heard difficult opinions. some likes and some dont.. (not just in this forum)

but well yea .. any idea what could be done better?

[Throsti]

What a gangsta rap

[TheKomodo]

sm0k, my serious advice, it's better to compose and produce the backing track yourself also, as soon as this beat starting playing I knew it was a "free beat" that you can download from the net, these tracks have no soul and no passion to them, and the only way to make it in the music business, or even be taken seriously is to have soul and passion in your music.

A Polish guy Rapping in German though... That's f@#!ing funny xDxD

[philie]

Leroy: it's not my music, but i know some good german rap and this does not belong to it.
sm0k: you gotta practice your voice.

[philie]

example: